Kia ora, I am a student at Belfast School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share and Grow.
Tuesday, December 10, 2019
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Kia ora Ariana, this is Kieryn from the Summer Learning Journey.
ReplyDeleteYou have got some fantastic information about Shelly-Ann Fraser-Pryce on your blog post! She is such an inspiration to so many people, and it is great to see you have chosen to write about her!
The photo on the right of your blog post shows her in action, and you can see just how focused and determined she is to do her best.
She has trained extremely hard to get a gold medal and be where she is today.
Have you ever wanted to enter the Olympics? If so, what sport would you want to compete in?
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Kia ora Ariana I like how how you did call pictures of Shelly Ann maybe next time you could make the title on the page. and do some facts about Shelly Ann. Next time you could do it on Usain bolt. And have you ever wanted to enter in the Olympics if so please tell me but still good job.
ReplyDeleteKia ora Ariana I like how you did cool pictures of Shelly Ann.
ReplyDeleteMaybe next time you could make the title a bit smaller because it would be easier to read.
Have you ever wondered about entering the olympics? If so please tell me, good job.